Monday, May 2, 2011

6 Weeks . . . Plenty of Time for Creativity!

With 6 weeks left in the school year, I've found that it can be incredibly difficult to keep middle school students in their seats. The excitement that they already feel towards our upcoming summer vacation has them counting down minutes until the end of the day-- and counting down days to the end of the week! ( . . . It's scary to think about this progression of energy building up over the next several weeks!)

. . . If only I could tap into more of that energy and direct it towards learning! (Isn't this every teacher's wish?)

The good news is this: the ticking clock hasn't stopped the creative juices from flowing! May the following polished "snippets" from our creative writing journals lead you sing, "I'm so happy, feeling snappy . . . my life is rosy . . ." And other fun things like that. ;-)

God bless,
~Michelle~

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6th Grade Journals


A new way to launch space ships into space

by Josiah

I was reading about how much it costs to send a space ship into space. It costs 450 million dollars per mission! No wonder America’s in debt. I was thinking that they should make a different way to send space ships to space that is cheaper. I think they should build a giant sling shot to fling space shuttles into space. It would be taller than the empire state building. The cord would be so hard to move but it wouldn’t break. It would be designed so some how it could fling a space ship into space. The space ship would use a little fuel to help it get through the atmosphere.

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Twistiosus

by Mallory

Once upon a time, there was a magical land called Twistiosus. There was just one problem. All of the people there had crooked, curved, silly noses. Most people believed they got these from the horrid weather. It was hard work to stay sane in the scorching hot climate they experienced. One day, the king decided he’s had enough. He held a contest between all the school-age children. The best idea to protect the poor, crooked nosed people from the weather would live in the palace. He or she would be treated like a prince the rest of their lives. Many children presented crazy ideas. One proposed several dragons go put a large wall between the sun and the land to provide some shade. Another suggested that everyone stay in a large circle and fan the person in front of them all day long. But the king laughed most at a little girl with a pot full of wet clay. “How will clay help anyone with the heinous heat, child? Go back to your games.” He chuckled. “Wait!” the girl cried. “Its more than just clay! Try it. You put a little on your face and shoulders, and the sun wont hurt that part of you.” The king tried a little. It worked! The little girl became a princess, the people were no longer bent out of shape by the sun, and sunscreen was born! They all lived happily ever after.

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7th Grade Journals

The Day I tried to Escape

by Zac

It was late, and it was time to escape. I knew tonight was my only opportunity. As the clock struck 12:00 I subtly made my way through the dark winding hallways, trying desperately not to let any floorboards creak. In the distance it became a black unknown path, I felt my way slowly with dread. Would I stumble, would I fall? Even though I feared for the worst I was determined to escape. I neared a window- I could see a faint light the seemed to merge into the bushes. I knew my friends were near, it was the right time and the right place. Behind me I could hear faint shrieks, that horror used to be mine, but not after today. As I thought I was home free I heard numerous foot steps rapidly heading my way. Was I trapped? I did not know behind which corner the men were concealed, so I went the only way I saw fit for escape. I punched the window and jumped right out into the misty night air. I was weightless, free. As I landed I could see the gate. I knew in its vicinity there were many dangers so I sprinted toward it desperately trying not to get caught. I could see the outside world. . . I had missed it, had it missed me? It certainly seemed to beckon.

8th Grade Journals


Dramatic Irony: Love

by Lauren

The young man went to find his girlfriend the BEST rose he could find. It was Valentine's day. He found a rose the color of the sunset. It was beautiful, so he bought hundreds of them! It used all of his money that he had been saving for his car. Then, he bought a beautiful diamond ring. He knew spending all of this money was going to be worth it all in the end though. He was planning to propose.

Meanwhile, the young lady was just coming back from the doctor's office. He had just told her that she was allergic to all types of roses. She was very upset about it, but she knew that her boyfriend had probably just bought her some cheap tulips or something. She walks into her apartment and sees the most lovely roses she had ever seen in her whole life, EVERYWHERE! Shocked with happiness, surprise, and an insane itching she looks around. Her beloved Jim stands in the middle of the room. He sweetly said, "Oh, lovely Julia. Will you do me the honor of being my wife?" She starts to cry in absolute joy. She heartily accepts his request. They then went out to eat and laugh about how she had itched herself during the whole proposal. She explained everything that had happened before hand to her new fiance.

Love is alike nothing,

Sometimes it makes you laugh,

Others it makes you cry


Roses are lovely,

They are made for love and joy,

That is why they are

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Dirty laundry

by Ellie

there once was a boy named Zach

he did his chores very lax

he was too young to pay tax

and he dint play the sax

and he never did his dirty laundry

they smelled like a dead donkey

pile on pile they grew

never being washed, he just bought new

and boy did they stink

and none of them were pink

one day the clothes started to speak the said they wanted to eat

they ate their master

with some plaster

quicker than I could wink

oh no

then his mother jumped in

threw water on them

they dissolved

and UN-evolved


and turned into a pile of laundry again

there once was a boy named Zach

and he never did his laundry lax

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